10 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-18 21:35:15content was ok – not enough paragraph spaces – you need to check gramar and spelling a lot better – storyline was good though – can’t wait for the next oneanonymous readerReport 2011-03-03 08:32:42OK story just so cliche. Cartoon porn the paragraphs were a headache..while the action was interesting ii a ll just seemd to be a run on stream of consciousness«12» the paragraphs were a headache..while the action was interesting ii a ll just seemd to be a run on stream of consciousness«12» Billion dollar company, thick 9″ cock, maid that wears heels sounds like a copy, paste from a poem script. Once I got to the part where you slid the book and the bookcase spun around I could have told you the restof the story from there.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-02 21:40:08Poooooooooop!!!!!! . . . . . . . . …-sighs- I don’t care what anyone says potty humor is the best anyway great story.anonymous readerReport 2011-03-02 17:36:21fgfgffgdfjdrydrycffwfceydgyrtefzvdggg it was bullsh*tbadbabysitterReport 2011-03-02 14:42:25nearly impossible to read..
