And 2, just work on the grammer some more«123» And 2, just work on the grammer some more«123» Thank you for your efforts.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-04 18:57:02Sacred sacred SACRED!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-10-22 00:13:40Its a pretty cool story but 1, why do the ppl still use swords if they have mchs and guns? And 2, just work on the grammer some more«123» 12 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-08 04:32:52Read the first couple of sentances and my first thought was, “Kenneth Lighthawk? Cartoon sex Really?Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-28 02:12:47i am not a tenchi fan so the story seemed good to me, keep writing, i will read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-06 22:36:43Since I don’t care a bit about anime or what ever the hell Tenchi is I can say that I like the world you created and am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Really?Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-28 02:12:47i am not a tenchi fan so the story seemed good to me, keep writing, i will read it.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-06 22:36:43Since I don’t care a bit about anime or what ever the hell Tenchi is I can say that I like the world you created and
